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Can't Help But Think
Contributed by
allforyou
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Sunday, 28th August 2005 @ 12:09:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
insomniac
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Can't help but think that these new sneakers will be all worn out by the time we meet again.
Can't help but think that my eyes will fade and there will be no sparkle to captivate you.
Can't help but think that thoughts of you will be the closest I get to warmth.
Can't help but think that these scars will be the only reminder of you I have.
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allforyou
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Re: Can't Help But Think
(User Rating: 1 ) by sprinter27 on
Sunday, 28th August 2005 @ 10:15:18 PM AEST (User
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aww... nice write. i enjoyed reading it (short, but sweet). and i can see the pain, so luck sent to you from me in your healing process. take care of yourself and keep on writing the good work!
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Re: Can't Help But Think
(User Rating: 1 ) by shep on
Friday, 2nd September 2005 @ 02:47:15 AM AEST (User
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short but it hit the spot so to speak. good one. |
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Re: Can't Help But Think
(User Rating: 1 ) by darkangeleyes57 on
Wednesday, 8th November 2006 @ 12:39:27 PM AEST (User
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This was really good.. Short yes but powerful and packed with emotion and feelings... Great poem...
Take care
Christina |
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