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The Girl Behind The Glass
Contributed by
rmcondon
on
Sunday, 28th August 2005 @ 10:39:52 AM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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The girl lies veiled in a youthful beauty,
she's softly resting her innocent eyes.
Her fragile frame of fair complexion's draped
delicately over rose and rue and time.
Such a perfect scene! Such fine creation!
All she's ever known-
She sleeps alone as an undefiled
prisoner of solitude that can't cease.
Her heart beats true with songs of naivety,
He gazed in towards her and whispered so gently,
'O beautiful girl, O picturesque world,
you're lost in a dream-'
Dawn delivers a great awakening,
such a transcendent perspicuity.
Tenderly she raises forth her velvet hands
and peers out at another reality.
Sighs broken hearted, trapped isolated,
by perfidious glass.
A lone tear softly strokes her pale cheek;
pure bead of longing born of mournful eye.
And although beauty shall forever flourish,
she flies chained to lonliness, heartache and loss.
An innocence fled, a vision of Truth,
pressed up against pane.
Copyright ©
rmcondon
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2005-08-28 10:39:52]
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Re: The Girl Behind The Glass
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by EverlastingDawn on
Sunday, 28th August 2005 @ 11:25:10 AM AEST
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WOW- thats basically all that can describe this poem.
It left me absolutley speechless, its a wonderful poem!!!!!!
And it strikes a little too close to home for me...
Great Write
~Dawn |
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Re: The Girl Behind The Glass
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by allforyou on
Sunday, 28th August 2005 @ 12:13:10 PM AEST
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Kind of reminds me of Snow White...
excellent write...
--Kar |
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Re: The Girl Behind The Glass
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by anitajames on
Sunday, 28th August 2005 @ 04:14:06 PM AEST
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| Beautiful language throughout. I loved it! |
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Re: The Girl Behind The Glass
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by Shade on
Sunday, 28th August 2005 @ 08:54:02 PM AEST
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excellent poem
i love it beautiful imagery and wording
The Changing Man |
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Re: The Girl Behind The Glass
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by shasay on
Wednesday, 31st May 2006 @ 02:29:32 AM AEST
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bravo old chap
im really in to this kind if thing
these kind of poems motivate me to get out the dictionary man
sweet keep up the good work |
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