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Bloodstained Tears
Contributed by
HatchetGirl
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Sunday, 28th August 2005 @ 03:02:58 AM in AEST
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Dreams turn to nightmares
wishes become nothing more than dust
hope fades away after awhile
and tears are just like clear blood
No one can be a virgin
when life screws us all
but when the sand runs out
there's nowhere to turn
your life is over, there's nothing you can do
so just give in to the power greater than you
you drown yourself in bloodstained tears
because you don't know the truth
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HatchetGirl
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2005-08-28 03:02:58]
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Re: Bloodstained Tears
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by sandypoet on
Sunday, 28th August 2005 @ 10:16:49 AM AEST
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| I loved your poem because so many in the world today feel the way you do. I guess since I have known the Lord at the age of 12. I don't exactly how you feel. But I can say this.When our minds get on things around us. We can't see GOD. If we think of ourselves. or life so much. We can't see him that way either. He has taught me this. I know that I know that if you get your mind on him and seek his face, seek his voice. everything about him. YOU will find him and your life can be turned around and see happiness that you dreamed of. and the excitement of the other world that he has planed for you. |
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Re: Bloodstained Tears
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by rmcondon on
Sunday, 28th August 2005 @ 11:37:20 AM AEST
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| I like this because we all feel like it sometime. You have articulated the feeling superbly. great write! |
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Re: Bloodstained Tears
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by forsaken_soul33 on
Monday, 29th August 2005 @ 04:41:06 PM AEST
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No one can be a virgin
when life screws us all
but when the sand runs out
there's nowhere to turn
This was the line that really caught my attention. It's true, life is always screwing people over. I really liked your poem because I can relate to it. Keep up the good work.
bye,
☺Mando☺ |
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Re: Bloodstained Tears
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by sick_n_twisted on
Tuesday, 30th August 2005 @ 12:52:07 AM AEST
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man this is a good poem...like i just loved the flow and the rythem of this poem...even the title of it is good
~GREAT WRITE~
Keep it up !!
Deedee, |
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