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the morning air
Contributed by
lostrelic
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Saturday, 27th August 2005 @ 11:27:48 PM in AEST
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this vision so surreal the sun shining over a lake so calm
the morning birds singing there harmonious song
i awake from my tent in the shade the mountain casts
drawing this vision hoping its beauty will last
coffee on brew as a eagle soars by
free from this stress floating so high
i walk to the creek the babble of the brook
washing my tumoil the sins that i took
look in the distance a doe that i see
curiosity getting the better it walks to me
i sit and we stare a silence so serene
the breath from this beast so crisp in the air
looking at the colours the joy so fair
this is just one day of many to be
i will write them down for all to see
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Re: the morning air
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by brew on
Saturday, 27th August 2005 @ 11:31:24 PM AEST
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great visual here. to just sit and take in all that can be taken in..........simply cherishing
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Re: the morning air
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by inoc on
Sunday, 28th August 2005 @ 12:24:49 AM AEST
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Oh I liked this, hey it is like your diary!
Keep them coming, what a different way to write poetry, at libraries! Where would we be without them!
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by MorningDove on
Sunday, 28th August 2005 @ 12:25:24 AM AEST
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This is thrilling. I can truly visualize this. What wonderful sights to wake up too. I am going to love your running commentary on your trek. Thank you for sharing with us.
Smiles n hugs,
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Re: the morning air
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by Fionndruinne on
Sunday, 28th August 2005 @ 02:11:45 AM AEST
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Sounds like a superlative way to spend time. I have myself considered taking off into the Unknown for a bit. May your path continue to lead to inspiration, as this fine piece shows it clearly has.
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Re: the morning air
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by Sahara on
Sunday, 28th August 2005 @ 07:40:13 AM AEST
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Beautiful write, terrific visualization.
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Re: the morning air
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by rmcondon on
Sunday, 28th August 2005 @ 10:44:39 AM AEST
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| I love the imagery here, is very evocative. Great write! |
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Re: the morning air
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by Sinned on
Monday, 29th August 2005 @ 07:09:52 AM AEST
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Lostrelic
You are indeed a lost relic---Glad I found your poetry.
I went with your words and felt as if I were walking with you.
I could feel and breath the fresh morning air,wash away my sins in the babbling brook.
I could see an eagle high and almost touch the doe.
The colors touched my soul.
What a wonderful,beautiful,poem.
Thanks for your sharing : )
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