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Pills
Contributed by
spazz911
on
Saturday, 27th August 2005 @ 11:24:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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Takes out the bottle
Turns it over again
Hears all the clatter
As she sees the pills; her old friends
Pours out the poison
Sees it rest in her palm
Considers the damage
All the harm they have done
Dangerous mixes
She knows they must cause
But for that knock-out apparel
A most glorious fall
Picks out a couple
These few will suffice
To put her into
A self induced night
Fills up her water
Can’t wait to wash it all down
Feeling the bumps
As she waits with no frown
Lies down on her bed
Awaiting the dark
Soon to consume her
Take the pain from her heart
Slowly slips into unconsciousness
Her life fades away
Tangled in blankets
In a cold hard steel cage
Silence is still
As sleep turns to death
Took one pill too many
For a quick painless rest
Takes out the bottle
Turns it over again
Hears all the clatter
As she sees the pills; her old friends
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2005-08-27 23:24:51]
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Re: Pills
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by lostrelic on
Saturday, 27th August 2005 @ 11:41:04 PM AEST
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| great write ive also had that demon on my back once i underseand the old friend |
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Re: Pills
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by starry_eyed_soul on
Sunday, 28th August 2005 @ 12:04:14 AM AEST
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| really good.. but please dont do that... if u are just know im always here if u ever need to talk.. |
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Re: Pills
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by sprinter27 on
Sunday, 28th August 2005 @ 09:59:43 PM AEST
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OMG! kc, you aren't taking any pills are you? cause, i mean, that would be killer for me. i don't need 2 suicidal friends! our trio wouldn't be right! please, kc, don't do this if you are. call me if you feel like it, i don't want you doing this to your body! we have to prove my bros wrong! remember!
okay, forget about that paragraph for now ^^. good write, kc. i liked it. back to paragraph feelings. please, don't do this. i care about you, and keep up the good work!
Your Best Friend Until the End,
~sprints |
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