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Afternoon hallucinogenic thought #7
Contributed by
Shifted
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Saturday, 27th August 2005 @ 10:22:06 PM in AEST
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oops
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pack.
burn.
pull.
breathe.
Spiraling through the haze,
Clouds of my own creation.
I'm flyin' high now,
Cause ganja gave me wings.
My blue sky blonde and I,
Drifting through this avian realm.
pack.
burn.
pull.
breathe.
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Shifted
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2005-08-27 22:22:06]
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Re: Afternoon hallucinogenic thought #7
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by lostrelic on
Saturday, 27th August 2005 @ 11:45:57 PM AEST
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| lol interesting write well have fun soaring |
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Re: Afternoon hallucinogenic thought #7
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by Shifted on
Sunday, 28th August 2005 @ 01:30:56 AM AEST
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| everyone who reads, i would appreciate some feedback. remeber, this poem was written in a few minutes and was assisted by some fine columbian herb, so keep that in mind when criticizing. |
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Re: Afternoon hallucinogenic thought #7
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by PoeticLicense on
Sunday, 28th August 2005 @ 01:54:28 AM AEST
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| Don't do drugs. |
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Re: Afternoon hallucinogenic thought #7
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by Jane_Doe on
Sunday, 28th August 2005 @ 05:06:53 AM AEST
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| Nice description. Hope you had fun. |
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Re: Afternoon hallucinogenic thought #7
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 28th August 2005 @ 10:46:41 AM AEST
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I love this poem except for the words pack , burn, pull , breathe. It would be better without them. Great write and remember puff, puff, pass LOL.
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