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Contributed by
gwenevere
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Saturday, 27th August 2005 @ 06:10:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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Standing on the edge of time, I slowly close my eyes
About to grow much calmer, about to grow more wise
I hear the waves keep pounding, around and far below
My past life stands before me, within the tides swift flow
The castle is so near me,it's stood the test of time
And deep within my heart I know my past is intertwined
The howling wind now calls me, a voice so full and strong
I feel the pull within my soul that tells me I belong
I kneel within the ruins and feel such peace within
A place of perfect harmony,a presence strokes my skin
I hear the sound of welcome,I wait here not alone
I'm happy and content now, for at last I've returned home
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gwenevere
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2005-08-27 18:10:32]
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Re: Home
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by Ripper_Something_Unusual on
Saturday, 27th August 2005 @ 06:15:43 PM AEST
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| thats a great write...this has some really good vibes to it and I enjoyed it. Very powerful... keep up the good work. |
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Re: Home
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by MorningDove on
Saturday, 27th August 2005 @ 07:07:01 PM AEST
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Beautifully penned with a deep spiritual feeling to it. It is always nice to find that feeling of knowing where you belong. I really loved this write.
Smiles,
Rita |
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Re: Home
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by Jaycee on
Saturday, 27th August 2005 @ 09:35:40 PM AEST
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| An awesome write. The words flowed like sparkling water down a sweet glade, cool and refreshing. Very nice imagery. |
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Re: Home
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 27th August 2005 @ 10:26:20 PM AEST
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A beautiful work of poetic art, laced with a contentment that brings peace of mind . . .
Ben |
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Re: Home
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by Man_On_High on
Sunday, 28th August 2005 @ 12:38:31 AM AEST
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Oh Ros..
this brings me back-
I'ts a fare thing to read you again my friend..
a fare thing INDEED!
..and I KNOW that Tintagel was just as wonderous..
It's great to see you back..
..great beyond the telling..
Yours-
B |
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Re: Home
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by Fionndruinne on
Sunday, 28th August 2005 @ 01:40:48 AM AEST
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You show skill with rhyme and rhythm here, and the theme is pleasing and refreshing. The name, Tintagel, itself, is poetry. I have always admired it.
Keep it up.
Andrew |
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