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wind
Contributed by
theimaginationofluke
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Saturday, 27th August 2005 @ 05:39:42 PM in AEST
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the wind,
the wind
it blows away
it loves the earth as bright as day
may blow the hay in the day
but it doesnt blow me away!!!
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Re: wind
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by brew on
Saturday, 27th August 2005 @ 06:43:17 PM AEST
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Cute, and not bad for a 6 yr old. Lil ditty like that make you look back and say wow.....I could do something.
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Re: wind
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by xXxmegsxXx on
Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 03:11:43 PM AEST
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| its not rubbish! when i was six i doutb i could spell day, let alone find something that rhymes with it! |
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Re: wind
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by JenJen on
Thursday, 15th September 2005 @ 08:56:20 AM AEST
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| no ofence but this poem suks luke. i cud have written it wen i was about 4! anyway i personally think u cud do better ! from louise laura jenny and gemma x |
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