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Contributed by
mckayla
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Wednesday, 15th January 2003 @ 05:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Because I love you,
you have a place in my heart
where ever I go we will never be apart
days go by and I think of you
every step I take you take to.
because I love you,
my dreams are enchanting every night
my morning cup of coffee tastes just right
the seasons pass by and you are still with me
Our names are still carved in an oak tree
because I love you,
I call you for a shoulder to cry on
if you fall I will give you me to fall apon
I will never let you go
I thought I would let you know
because I love you......
Copyright ©2003 Katherine L Chaffee
Copyright ©
mckayla
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2003-01-15 05:00:00]
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Re: You
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by spooky on
Wednesday, 15th January 2003 @ 06:04:18 AM AEST
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| beautifully written,,with heart,,it'sprecious to him,,thank you,,a friend in words,,spooky |
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Re: You
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by Jackee_line on
Wednesday, 15th January 2003 @ 06:47:34 AM AEST
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A fine write written from the heart.
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Re: You
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by OreO on
Wednesday, 15th January 2003 @ 09:40:52 AM AEST
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Absolutely beautiful Katherine...i hope he see's this his heart will surely melt with pleasure and desire and love for you.....thank you for sharing this one ....i look forward to reading more....
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:. |
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Re: You
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by Ramfire on
Wednesday, 15th January 2003 @ 12:59:30 PM AEST
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Your poem touches my heart. Great write.
I can tell you love your husband deeply.
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Ramfire |
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Re: You
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by mckayla on
Wednesday, 15th January 2003 @ 02:46:42 PM AEST
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| read black rose that will tell you how much I love my EX- husband!!!!lol |
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Re: You
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by WordPoet on
Wednesday, 15th January 2003 @ 05:21:07 PM AEST
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Recognition of love and understanding that someone fills a void within you is a great and wonderful gift to share with someone. Whoever this poem is intended for is truly blessed.
Doug
"People are like stars, there are a million of them but only one can make your dreams come true." |
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Re: You
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by roisin on
Wednesday, 15th January 2003 @ 08:57:17 PM AEST
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love and hate...you have described both so well in your work...keep writing!
rosie |
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Re: You
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by wordsy on
Wednesday, 15th January 2003 @ 09:59:26 PM AEST
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A well worded weaving.
A very good write,
wordsy. |
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Re: You
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by karoody on
Tuesday, 15th April 2003 @ 05:58:01 PM AEST
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beautiful write...you do need to post more...you express your emotions so well..
hugs
kara |
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Re: You
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by ArdRi79 on
Saturday, 22nd November 2003 @ 11:08:57 PM AEST
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| I like the way the last line doesnt rhyme it reinforces your point, and its a beautifull poem |
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