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Escape
Contributed by
Mara
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Saturday, 27th August 2005 @ 12:24:15 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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more than anything
I wish you’d take my hand
and we could step out of our lives
and into the darkness
we’d run through the streets
scared of this place
that ties and binds us
and catch a train,
all through the night
we’d close our eyes
and see with the silence
we’d get off in a city
that’s crisp and softly gray
we’d walk slowly on
the muddy road
we’d see the lights
of distant buildings
and lose ourselves
in the drifting snow
Copyright ©
Mara
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2005-08-27 00:24:15]
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Re: Escape
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by Rasputin_the_Second on
Saturday, 27th August 2005 @ 12:33:40 AM AEST
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Great visuals for me.
I've always gotten those urges to do something rash and impractical, just to get away.
Enjoyed it, thanks. |
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Re: Escape
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by ABySs on
Saturday, 27th August 2005 @ 12:41:29 AM AEST
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| you paint a very nice picture with those words |
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Re: Escape
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by Archie on
Saturday, 27th August 2005 @ 03:29:33 AM AEST
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| To go off on an excursion like that would be fun atleast until I had to go back home. Your imagery in this poem is very good. |
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Re: Escape
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by anitajames on
Saturday, 27th August 2005 @ 02:34:45 PM AEST
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| I like it and I can relate. but as good as it is to get away, isn't it always a relief to get back home? |
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Re: Escape
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 27th August 2005 @ 03:58:17 PM AEST
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| Oh how i love to escape from everything fortunatly for me all I have to do is step outside and just look up at the sky and into the clouds to escape and think about all the good times i've had and more to come. Good write. Enjoyed reading. thanks for sharing |
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