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Step Back
Contributed by
spazz911
on
Friday, 26th August 2005 @ 10:15:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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distracted
step back
fall down
crash and burn
when you step outside yourself
open for all those thoughts
no one there will help you
to toss out truth from fate
only solid judgement
is staring in your face
continually moving
trying to keep calm
because what your seeing
is dangerously near
dont look too long
the truth is hard to bare
just glance then run
or you will never breath again
distracted
step back
fall down
crash and burn
Copyright ©
spazz911
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2005-08-26 22:15:42]
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Re: Step Back
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by Mara on
Saturday, 27th August 2005 @ 12:44:58 AM AEST
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| wow, this is powerful, i like it. |
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Re: Step Back
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by starry_eyed_soul on
Saturday, 27th August 2005 @ 01:57:00 AM AEST
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| another great write casey.... |
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Re: Step Back
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by sprinter27 on
Saturday, 27th August 2005 @ 10:29:32 PM AEST
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good write, kc. very powerful. i liked this one. and so you took my advise to come back. lol. take care, friend and keep up the good work.
~sprints |
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