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Heart and Soul
Contributed by
bgj
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Friday, 26th August 2005 @ 08:46:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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There’s a soul adrift on the sea of sorrow
Dreading the dawn of every tomorrow,
Living on dreams of love now past
Broken promises that did not last.
There’s a shattered heart that longs to mend
Blown about in a painful wind,
Wishing for just one more chance
To join in loves tender dance.
There’s a troubled mind full of hopeless thoughts
That remembers an angel it once caught,
But taken for granted in too many ways
The angel it loved just could not stay.
A love once flourished, strong and clear
Filled with wonder, precious and dear
But too many mistakes day by day,
And slowly it perished and faded away.
Bobby G. Jarrard
Copyright 2005 by Bobby G. Jarrard
Copyright ©
bgj
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2005-08-26 20:46:04]
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Re: Heart and Soul
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 26th August 2005 @ 09:33:03 PM AEST
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| Very clever write Bobby. I know I have felt this at times but I keep searching for the one to end my search. Good luck to you and keep writing, this is very good.......Mike |
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Re: Heart and Soul
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by EricBRamey on
Friday, 26th August 2005 @ 10:28:30 PM AEST
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| Nice work Bobby....I can relate...keep up the the exceptional writing...Eric |
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Re: Heart and Soul
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by liquidsunshine on
Saturday, 27th August 2005 @ 12:31:41 AM AEST
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This flowed incredibly well in the mind and on the tongue. Sorry about your lost love. I pray you'll find love again someday.
Love and peace,
Chelsea |
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