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Finding It
Contributed by
EricBRamey
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Friday, 26th August 2005 @ 08:45:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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When you have it do you know?
Caring voice and love given in vain,
Words and sentences written in pain,
Giving it up, for reasons unknown.
Finding another or finding yourself,
I love you but you don't give back,
The suffering still goes on,
Love doesn't end, it just continues without.
When you get it do you know?
Or do you shun it for other things not known,
Finding hearts in other places,
Giving it up, after you have found your other soul.
Eric B. Ramey
Copyright ©2005 Eric B. Ramey
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EricBRamey
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2005-08-26 20:45:20] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Finding It
(User Rating: 1 ) by liquidsunshine on
Saturday, 27th August 2005 @ 12:34:43 AM AEST (User
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"Love doesn't end, it just continues without."
For me, truer words were never spoken.
"after you have found your other soul."
You too, eh? I know the joy of finding it and the contentment of having it and the excrutiating pain of losing it as well.
Love and peace,
Chelsea
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Re: Finding It
(User Rating: 1 ) by Ruby2sdy on
Sunday, 28th May 2006 @ 04:46:17 AM AEST (User
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a really nice piece, captured the meotion really well, 2sdy x |
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