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death or prison, ur mine either way
Contributed by
dagonet
on
Friday, 26th August 2005 @ 07:38:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Feeling the skin contract beneath the applied force of my arms,
The blood beneath the skin pulses with the warmth of fear,
Fear of the end, fear of another beginning, fear of my decimate hatred,
The anger and aggression pulse with the warmth of hatred in my tense muscles,
Their compressions and contractions that will enact my long awaited vengeance,
Such simple actions of emotion, such complicated measures of a blackened heart,
All laws are broken, feelings cross all lines, and such diligence feels liberating,
As my corrupted blood fuels my darkened muscles to break a human body,
To snap, to tear, to resurrect all suppressed hatred and strike out in victorious malice,
The liberation of this criminal action excels into such intensive desires,
Desire to destroy, desire to kill, desire to end, desire to repeat, desire to enjoy,
And enjoy it I shall for this moment hath been long coming, no regret or remorse left to bear,
My guilt flushes from my tattered soul in synchronised motions with the blood in his throat,
This pitiful vessel shall summon all its strength to enact my will to destroy him and his petulance for my instincts now rule,
All because he thought he was untouchable, free from all guilt himself, he was a ***** fool.
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Re: death or prison, ur mine either way
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 27th August 2005 @ 03:23:15 PM AEST
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| I liked it, I dont know if i should have but I did, it was very emotion felt, very truthful in a way I guess, but in some ways I guess everyone at some point feels that urge whether its towards themselves or others. Good write keep it up. |
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Re: death or prison, ur mine either way
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by RickShaw on
Sunday, 28th August 2005 @ 11:18:48 AM AEST
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| Great poem keep up the good work - (the poetry not the killing people) |
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Re: death or prison, ur mine either way
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by WAE on
Saturday, 10th September 2005 @ 02:43:39 PM AEST
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Hello there,
Look R. what I think is that you have tremendous potential as a writer for all these emotional images you have. You should try yourself writing short stories. I'd be glad to see the results.
Alex |
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