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THE WOODS
Contributed by
chazthepoet
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Friday, 26th August 2005 @ 06:24:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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The woods,
The woods,
The deep, dark woods,
The trees,
They see,
They watch,
Watch me,
I see them all,
They crowd
Around,
They bend,
Bend down,
Leaning down,
I see the beasts,
The beasts see me,
I watch,
They approach,
They smell,
The fear from me,
I flee,
They follow,
They follow me,
Surrounded now,
No trees to see,
Just faces,
Grotesque faces,
Peering at me,
They all pounce,
Pounce on me,
I see no more,
The end of me.
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chazthepoet
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2005-08-26 18:24:49]
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Re: THE WOODS
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 26th August 2005 @ 08:42:55 PM AEST
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Oh yes, I have been in the woods late at night.. I can feel that feeling. Trees in the dark.. you know something is there.. an animal. Sure they can see you, but you can't see them always.
Still other faces in the dark in those woods are haunting.
And then, finally, there is natural beauty in the woods as well.
Your poem creates lots of senses.
Raquel Leah :D |
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Re: THE WOODS
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by RickShaw on
Sunday, 28th August 2005 @ 11:21:10 AM AEST
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Great poem- really nice flow.
Take it easy |
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