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I Did It!
Contributed by
DesolantDreamer
on
Friday, 26th August 2005 @ 04:36:04 PM in AEST
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When I'm out there on the court
I lose myself
My heartbeat and the ball being hit is all I hear
My goal, my only reason for playing
Rests in me hitting that ball over the net
My focus is on an ace
Here it comes
Over that net into my teritory
1 hit, then 2
Right to me
Adrinalin pumping
Heart racing
I pass it over
Screams echo through the gym as it hits the floor
Tears whell up in my eyes
I did it!
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2005-08-26 16:36:04]
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Re: I Did It!
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 26th August 2005 @ 04:38:38 PM AEST
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| Good write keep it up. |
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Re: I Did It!
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by Jackee_line on
Friday, 26th August 2005 @ 05:12:25 PM AEST
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| Well done |
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Re: I Did It!
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by Archie on
Friday, 26th August 2005 @ 10:28:12 PM AEST
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| I like the simplicity in your write and how you show what you like. Great job. |
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