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Billion verses versus Veracity
Contributed by
duch
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Friday, 26th August 2005 @ 03:16:29 PM in AEST
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I don't rhyme for girls
or coins.
Punks dream
about notes.
Teenagers continually
talk about money.Evidently
problems approach...or
I'm intolerant.I rhyme for
free.Dog fodder will be
my food.
Hardcore?
Young brain in the hood...
This is as with polar mission
but auroras in television
are not the same like out-of-doors.
But with elite I create this.
You can rhyme better,I only worse.
Style hard like nut.Billions
verses I will crush in this game.
Is it sin,god?!
And maybe not?!
Indifferently where
I look,as across sea
Moses,I see
second shore.
Copyright ©
duch
... [
2005-08-26 15:16:29]
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Re: Billion verses versus Veracity
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by Archie on
Friday, 26th August 2005 @ 10:22:29 PM AEST
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It is okay that you can not rhyme so long as you get your meaning across.
This was a bit confusing. |
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Re: Billion verses versus Veracity
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by R0b on
Saturday, 27th May 2006 @ 07:31:31 PM AEST
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| Who cares how confusing it is. Its different, its interesting and its original. Good write. |
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Re: Billion verses versus Veracity
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 29th May 2006 @ 01:36:17 AM AEST
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Um, excuse me, But your poetry is fantastic. I'm stunned to find one of your type in this place-I see my own style throughout. Unfortunately, Many fine poets such as yourself do not recieve due credit here, but you sir (or madam) are one very skilled figurative poet, and I will be checking in on you from this point on.
you're welcome,
black. |
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