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I Live I Die
Contributed by
candysears
on
Friday, 26th August 2005 @ 01:44:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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By: Carolyn Sears
I live, I die Into a world
Of madness I cry;
I'm haunted by death that
Seeks me;
The essence of life cease as
If I never existed~
I'm just a mere memory of this
Life~
My fate is of the animal that
Is slaughtered to feed the body
From hunger~
Death finally kiss my lips
To seal and steal the breath
Of life~
To cover my body In the cold
Black earth;
My voice Is silenced,my body Is
Rigid and cold~
My eyes are close to eternal darkness;
Death do haunt me~
I live, I die
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candysears
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2005-08-26 13:44:06]
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Re: I Live I Die
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by Archie on
Friday, 26th August 2005 @ 02:10:29 PM AEST
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| I know how you feel. I realise that I need to have more courage in my life to live more happily and be more of a giver. I want no regrets when I get older. |
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Re: I Live I Die
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by shelby on
Friday, 26th August 2005 @ 02:43:08 PM AEST
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almost chilling you put your emotion to word in a wonderful style nicely penned
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Re: I Live I Die
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 26th August 2005 @ 04:41:31 PM AEST
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| Very good, I really liked it keep it up. |
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Re: I Live I Die
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by colinbaker62 on
Saturday, 27th August 2005 @ 07:07:21 PM AEST
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Somewhat sad yes, but therapeutic also I feel, as you are writing down your inner emotions which can only be a good thing in the long run I think.
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