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Miserable
Contributed by
shae
on
Friday, 26th August 2005 @ 11:07:41 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Miserable
No matter what I do
I am always wrong
I’m sick of life
It’s been too long
I just wish that I would go away
To a different world,
My life I would pay
To leave this world, would be so grand
My life is so miserable
You must understand
Bottle of aspirin, knife in my hand
Finding a tall building
Just to leave this land
Nobody has loved me, nobody has cared
Maybe it’s me playing tricks, maybe my visions impaired
No matter how it’s done, my life I will end
Goodbye, farewell, Till I see you again
There goes my heart, there goes my breath
There goes my life, by an untimely death
You never thought this would happen to me
You never thought this could actually be
My life,
The end
Till I see you again
Copyright ©
shae
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2005-08-26 11:07:41]
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Re: Miserable
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by hunterj2k on
Friday, 26th August 2005 @ 12:37:47 PM AEST
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Very intense. . .and sad. Gripping. *hugs*
Good poem. |
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Re: Miserable
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by xXxmegsxXx on
Friday, 26th August 2005 @ 04:58:35 PM AEST
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| very sad, beautifully written |
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Re: Miserable
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by Black_Dragon on
Friday, 26th August 2005 @ 10:31:16 PM AEST
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| I can relate to the poem. I want to die and go to a land of dragons. Till then, its a very good poem. |
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Re: Miserable
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by anitajames on
Saturday, 27th August 2005 @ 02:46:24 PM AEST
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| Very sad and desparate. I hope that writing about makes you feel better. It usually helps me. |
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Re: Miserable
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by kcampbell on
Friday, 16th September 2005 @ 03:11:08 PM AEST
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| I've got an account now, inspired by you. I'm commenting on this poem by saying that I love you and I care. I'm Katie in case you hadn't figured it out. Love ya, me |
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