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IT'S BEEN
Contributed by
lemmen
on
Friday, 26th August 2005 @ 09:59:04 AM in AEST
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It's been a long time since
I've written a word
But know i have something to say
To the one i love.
Blessed be her name
MADONNA
For she is my desire
She is my love
She has kept me from the doors
of death
She has healed my sickness
She is my Goddess
My true soul mate
And there is nothing in this world or the next
that shall keep me from loving
holding
keeping
You in my heart
ALWAYS.
It's been a long time since
I've written a word
But i thought it was time
and i had something to say.
BY DENNIS LEMMEN
Copyright ©
lemmen
... [
2005-08-26 09:59:04]
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Re: IT'S BEEN
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 26th August 2005 @ 10:24:32 AM AEST
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Hey Dennis...great to see you posting again...Welcome Home!!
This is a lovely write for your wife....
Glad to see you around again..
Jenni |
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Re: IT'S BEEN
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by Archie on
Friday, 26th August 2005 @ 10:42:20 AM AEST
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You can substitue Madaonna's name in this song:
"Maria, Say it loud and I hear music playing
Say it soft, and it's almost like praying
Maria, I'll never stop saying
Maria"
Quote from "Maria" by Johnny Mathis
I think your poem is very good. I like it's simplicity and deep declaration of appreciation. |
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Re: IT'S BEEN
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by pixie on
Sunday, 28th August 2005 @ 12:45:58 PM AEST
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nice to see you around again Dennis, I haven't been around that much for a few months, but I pop on now and again , hope to read more of your poems soon,
Pix xx |
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Re: IT'S BEEN
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Friday, 30th September 2005 @ 12:36:32 PM AEST
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awe you are so sweet and you really show how much you care about your wife. I think any man who can write about his woman this way is the best kind of man there could be. I thought this was so sweet.. great to see you're back :)
christina |
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Re: IT'S BEEN
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by THORN on
Thursday, 13th October 2005 @ 07:40:45 AM AEST
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Extremely sweet. Very nice poem :)
Good Luck to you both :D
5 stars. Affection is worth more.
Cheers,
-xXRayeXx |
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