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Come the Dawn
Contributed by
anitajames
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Friday, 26th August 2005 @ 09:16:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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Come the dawn,
I will be complete
I'll be no man's pawn.
Come the dawn,
A new sun will break
and melt the ice round my heart.
Come the dawn,
My broken soul mends
I'll love with no end.
Come the dawn,
My life will start over
We'll cherish each other.
Come the dawn,
All sins are forgiven
I can't wait to start.
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anitajames
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2005-08-26 09:16:00]
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Re: Come the Dawn
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 26th August 2005 @ 09:46:24 AM AEST
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| Beautiful not givig up and starting over poem. Wonderful read. Thanks..........Mike |
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Re: Come the Dawn
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by Archie on
Friday, 26th August 2005 @ 10:37:24 AM AEST
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| Simple and true faith is what I see in this poem. Great write. |
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Re: Come the Dawn
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by Winterland on
Friday, 26th August 2005 @ 11:08:35 AM AEST
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Very postive and uplifting. Nice work!
Jennifer |
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Re: Come the Dawn
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by Fionndruinne on
Friday, 26th August 2005 @ 03:32:58 PM AEST
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This is beautiful work. I love the hopefulness, and the sense of Light and renewal. Good work!
Andrew |
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Re: Come the Dawn
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by hoist1atca on
Friday, 26th August 2005 @ 06:53:51 PM AEST
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Sometimes the words are there but need a push-
Inspiration is onlythe pushing of your own emotions to action-
Keep reading as this is a great write with lots of strength and conviction-
The pleasure was all mine as I read:
Joe |
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Re: Come the Dawn
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by Wachumiri on
Saturday, 24th September 2005 @ 05:23:52 AM AEST
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I'm glad Hope stayed. This is one of your best, I think. If nothing else, one of my favorites.
Take care.
David |
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