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Untouchable
Contributed by
Tamara
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Friday, 26th August 2005 @ 07:52:55 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Don't touch me when I'm angry
I might say something I'll regret
Don't touch me when I'm hurting
I might become even more upset
Don't touch me when I'm hungry
I might bite off more than I can chew
Don't touch me when I'm sad
I might say something hurtful to you
Don't touch me when I'm frustrated
I might not swing and miss
Don't touch me when I'm sleeping
I might not give you one final kiss
Don't touch me when I'm tired
I might be a little restless
Don't touch me when I'm feeling sick
I might be rendered senseless
Copyright ©
Tamara
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2005-08-26 07:52:55]
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Re: Untouchable
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by Archie on
Friday, 26th August 2005 @ 10:22:32 AM AEST
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| O-kay . . .No physical contact that is good. |
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Re: Untouchable
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by hoist1atca on
Friday, 26th August 2005 @ 06:38:52 PM AEST
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Good write-
Try this:
My Recipe for Emotional Bliss
for the untouchable soul.
A soft word to sooth the anger-
A gentle embrace to sooth the pain-
A simple pat of the tummy to chase away the growling beast-
A whisper of simpathy upon the ear to ease the heartache-
A small word of reason to lift the cloud of uncertainty-
A tender touch of lips to wake your passion-
A shoulder for your support-
A bit of tender love to sooth the unsettled nerves-
Joe
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