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Some Thoughts
Contributed by
valichka
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Friday, 26th August 2005 @ 04:31:08 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Some thoughts are different,
Some thoughts are true,
Maybe you need me the way I need you.
Some thoughts are about friends
and some are about you,
Maybe you love me the way I love you.
Some thoughts are nice,
Some thoughts are cool,
Something is special all about you.
Maybe your drfferent maybe your true,
maybe you need me the way I need you.
Copyright ©
valichka
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2005-08-26 04:31:08]
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Re: Some Thoughts
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by emystar on
Friday, 26th August 2005 @ 04:47:18 AM AEST
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Very good write especially for an 11 year old.
huggs,
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Re: Some Thoughts
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by Jeff_Scott_Morehead on
Friday, 26th August 2005 @ 08:25:34 AM AEST
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Wow, you were a gifted eleven year old.
Nicely done.
Jeff |
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Re: Some Thoughts
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by Archie on
Friday, 26th August 2005 @ 10:19:58 AM AEST
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| How old are you now. If you don't mind me asking. Your poem is good. |
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Re: Some Thoughts
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by anitajames on
Saturday, 27th August 2005 @ 02:47:50 PM AEST
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| You made me smile. My 12 year old is a writer as well, so age does not matter. Talent shines through regardless of how old you are or were when you wrote. |
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