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Mind Game
Contributed by
ABySs
on
Friday, 26th August 2005 @ 02:40:09 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Mind the enemy
fighting against me
Rush of blood
Like a hammers thud
Eyes switch sides
Light now blinds
Sweet sounds
Drive the hammer home
Seeking Darkness
Away from it all
relief hoping to find
But elusive as time
Blood rush
Day fades away
The pain stays
Welcome to what a migraine is like
Copyright ©
ABySs
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2005-08-26 02:40:09]
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Re: Mind Game
(User Rating: 1 )
by Jane_Doe on
Friday, 26th August 2005 @ 03:51:42 AM AEST
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| I thought it was lovely. The rhyming was great and it symbolized more than a migraine to me. I liked it. |
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Re: Mind Game
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by Archie on
Friday, 26th August 2005 @ 10:15:12 AM AEST
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| You described that very well. The last couple of days I have been sick so I can kind of relate (Sinus Headache) I hope you feel better |
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Re: Mind Game
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by Mara on
Saturday, 27th August 2005 @ 12:11:49 AM AEST
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| i LOVE this, you did a great job! |
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Re: Mind Game
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by WAE on
Saturday, 10th September 2005 @ 05:04:48 PM AEST
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| Although it sounds somewhat weird, I liked it. |
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