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What did I do last night
Contributed by
Archie
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Thursday, 25th August 2005 @ 10:56:43 PM in AEST
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Introduction: You don't want this to happen to you.
I woke up with a pounding headache today
for what I did last night
I took some aspirn but it would not go away
tell me what I did last night
You say that you are very mad at me
for actions that have caused you very great grief
please tell me all the things I said and I did
so I can ask your forgiveness
I got a call from my girlfriend on the phone
for what I had done last night
She said I was not her boyfriend any more
because what I did last night
If I could just remember what I said and did
then I could ask my girl for forgiveness
I can''t get by all of this pounding in my head
that blocks out the whole memory
I went to work to do my job today
but what did I do last night
My boss was waiting at the door for me
he gave me a pink slip "Good bye"
If I could just remember what I said and did
then I could seek forgiveness for my sins
I can''t get by this pounding deep inside my head
that keeps those memories from me
The police knocked upon my door and I answered
"What did you do last night
Please come with me down to the station
so we can figure out your plight
This is a poem version of this song which took 3 months to write
Copyright ©
Archie
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Re: What did I do last night
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by holderofthestone on
Thursday, 25th August 2005 @ 11:00:27 PM AEST
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well coming from someone who does drink (and sometimes to much :( ...) this is dead on...
"If I could just remember what I said and did
then I could seek forgiveness for my sins"-- these lines stick out the most to me because i've lived them... great great write yet again! A++++ |
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Re: What did I do last night
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by MorningDove on
Thursday, 25th August 2005 @ 11:20:47 PM AEST
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Very sad, Archie. I hope you never take up the habit. Alcohol and drugs have destroyed so many people and so many families and is death for many. This write is very good and I hope will make a few people think.
Smiles,
Rita |
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Re: What did I do last night
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 25th August 2005 @ 11:42:33 PM AEST
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Archie, I love this so much..you took a serious issue and made it into something one can enjoy and from which one can learn. I hated one word in your presentation.... the word "yet" in your author's note.
Don't start!!
Jenni |
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Re: What did I do last night
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 26th August 2005 @ 12:47:33 AM AEST
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*****tell me what I did last night
*****please tell me all the things I said and I did
*****because what I did last night
****If I could just remember what I said and did
*****but what did I do last night
*****If I could just remember what I said and did
Excellent verses for a song
The forgetting sure can shape feelings in turn for the day after. It gives one a type of understanding to a feeling of forgetfulness to block out an emotional field of a nights play.
I sure would like to hear the tune that comes with it.. It sounds sad..
Once a year a $500.00 bottle of the best wine is not bad lol. I can't afford good stuff to make it a habit. Yes, I only go for the best.
I love your song. Send me a track if you get it published.
Raquel Leah ; )) |
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Re: What did I do last night
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by Darkhorse71 on
Friday, 26th August 2005 @ 01:22:36 AM AEST
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Hi Archie, I have to agree with Jenni_K, this was humorous and should make one think - especially you!!!
Peace, john |
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Re: What did I do last night
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by lostrelic on
Friday, 26th August 2005 @ 01:43:54 AM AEST
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| hey its just your human nature coming out when you drink when i blank out i usually wake up not alone but in life i am shy |
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Re: What did I do last night
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by emystar on
Friday, 26th August 2005 @ 04:37:06 AM AEST
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Well when u figure out what u didn't do I wonna know what it was.
Alchohol is bad, bad, bad. smiles,
emy
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Re: What did I do last night
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by brew on
Friday, 26th August 2005 @ 10:43:07 AM AEST
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WEll, that was agood post.......I gues ppl are that way. And why they get that bad, i cant see. I do drink, but NOT to get drunk.! Tipsy, yes. And if anyone says, drinking is bad................(and that is in the DRUNK status) I tell to red the bible.....lol! Hey, if water can be turned into wine.!Ok.....my opinion.! Good post.
brew~ |
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Re: What did I do last night
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 26th August 2005 @ 01:47:29 PM AEST
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| Great write. You brought a rare smile to my face. Many thanks. xx |
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