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Black Heart
Contributed by
sick_n_twisted
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Thursday, 25th August 2005 @ 09:57:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Your Cold
Too Deadly
Thick Black Blood
Cold as Ice
You push everyone around you away
I love you so much
Right down to your black heart
I kiss you
I hug you
You push me away
What is it that I love so much
I just dont understand
My heart is warm
My blood flows
Just like how its supposed to go
I love you to your deadly brain
To your jet black heart
Your cold
Too deadly
Your blood is running thin
Your time is running out
No one will ever listen to you
Especially as you SHOUT !
Everyone will turn against you
But thats how you love it
You and your deadly black heart
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sick_n_twisted
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2005-08-25 21:57:05]
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Re: Black Heart
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 25th August 2005 @ 10:16:52 PM AEST
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wow this is strong and powerful, sounds like some ones headed 4 a fall if ther not carefull, like your style, and directness very good poem . . .
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Re: Black Heart
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by holderofthestone on
Thursday, 25th August 2005 @ 10:18:19 PM AEST
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| i think we all know someone like this...it tough... you wrote it out nicely. A++ |
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Re: Black Heart
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 25th August 2005 @ 11:26:10 PM AEST
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Very Strong Emotions... Its wonderful
I sure can relate to this poem..
ty for sharin keep up the great writing
Hugggggggs
~~~Michelle~~~ |
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Re: Black Heart
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by lostrelic on
Friday, 26th August 2005 @ 12:55:58 AM AEST
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as someone who is cold and has a black heart thats not fair hehe nice write keep up the great work
lostrelic |
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Re: Black Heart
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by Davinah on
Friday, 26th August 2005 @ 09:39:57 AM AEST
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| I've got one too :) |
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Re: Black Heart
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 30th August 2005 @ 01:41:22 AM AEST
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| Really good, but I guess we all get that way sometimes, pushing away the ones we love more then anything, trying to protect them not realizing were hurting them more. |
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Re: Black Heart
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by angel_eyes70 on
Wednesday, 29th March 2006 @ 02:11:47 PM AEST
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Great Write!
xxxKimxxx |
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