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Write to Release
Contributed by
daydreamer22
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Thursday, 25th August 2005 @ 07:54:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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doom rising up
a strangers harsh stare
pain deeper than anyone cares to know
suffocating in a world of hate
cruelty spreads like a plague
hard hearts
hostile voices
wicked words
sadness consumes everything within
unable to hold onto reality
sinking into the darkness around me
i slide down into my chair
write for sweet release
saving me from myself
from what haunts
letting it through the doorway of my soul
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daydreamer22
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2005-08-25 19:54:55]
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Re: Write to Release
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Friday, 26th August 2005 @ 09:01:56 AM AEST
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| Writing is a great release. That's why we are all here. I liked your poem, full of emotion. Keep writing........Mike |
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Re: Write to Release
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by KarlaMarie on
Sunday, 4th June 2006 @ 10:55:40 PM AEST
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I enjoyed it, I just hope your teacher did as well
KarlaMarie |
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