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Why
Contributed by
his_3_nails
on
Thursday, 25th August 2005 @ 07:19:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Living my life
contsantly by fear
life seems to be a constant fight
dying inside, but still here
WHY do I
Cry
when people
DENY
always telling me a
LIE
never knowing but I
TRY
failure leaving me to
DIE
no one to hear my
Outcry
just only wanted to know
WHY
Never having hope
always seeming to be lost
pain preventing me to cope
I give in, as I exhast
Wanting to know.......
WHY
Why is it that I live with this pain
I dont undersand the depression
with all agony driving me insane
never ceasing without agression
all whenever I ask
WHY
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his_3_nails
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2005-08-25 19:19:58]
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Re: Why
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 25th August 2005 @ 07:23:30 PM AEST
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| Interesting concept, I can relate to this poem, I understand you, I know how you feel, I have often felt the same way, I have often asked myself Why. A very good moving write. Keep up the good work. SLipSiX. |
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Re: Why
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by sick_n_twisted on
Thursday, 25th August 2005 @ 09:32:26 PM AEST
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awesome poem....love the rhymes...the flow.....sry that u feel that way....i used to be like that and i know how you feel just know that theres others just the same potsition as you....and ur not alone....but nice write...
Dee |
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Re: Why
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by forsaken_soul33 on
Thursday, 25th August 2005 @ 09:56:46 PM AEST
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I can relate. I also find myself constantly asking why. But whenever you find the answer, be sure to let me know, because I have been searching for the answer as well. Nice write.
bye,
☺Mando☺ |
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Re: Why
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 25th August 2005 @ 11:31:10 PM AEST
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Beautifully Write .. Story of my life
I sure feel this write alot
Its sad but true.. all we can do is pray for release of that inner pain we carry..
Someday...Someday...
Keep up the great writing
Huggggggggs
~~~Michelle~~~ |
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Re: Why
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by lostrelic on
Friday, 26th August 2005 @ 01:51:25 AM AEST
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| sorry not to excited by the flow but hey i am just one bad critic keep on trying |
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Re: Why
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by helzwar007 on
Saturday, 27th August 2005 @ 10:18:27 PM AEST
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| aww baby.. we all ask why... just listen to gods voice... not the devil and listen to the angels.. they sing to you in the night... i love you and baby im here for you... mmmmwwwwaaaa.-sa-sa-b00ga-b00ga- |
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