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For the best person EVER.
Contributed by
lostwithoutyou
on
Thursday, 25th August 2005 @ 06:28:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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Where is my rain?
So I can hide my pain.
these chains are unbrakable,
This pain is unbarable.
These tears I cannot hide anymore.
But the love you show
Takes all that away.
You change the clouds in my sky
From being grey.
You turn the darkness
Into day.
You mend a heart,
Once broken apart.
You dry these tears,
And help me push back my fears.
Your jacket on my back,
I feel safe and warm.
Your hands my shoulders hold,
You have been the strength I've lacked,
You turned away the cold,
And I still trust in you
To hold me
Until I can stand alone.
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2005-08-25 18:28:46]
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Re: For the best person EVER.
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by Archie on
Thursday, 25th August 2005 @ 06:45:14 PM AEST
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| Great poem. I am glad I have close friends in my life. I don't know how much trouble I would be in if it wasn't for the help and honesty of a true friend. |
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Re: For the best person EVER.
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by poet70 on
Thursday, 25th August 2005 @ 06:55:40 PM AEST
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Hello Lostwithoutyou,
This is a great poem, I sure wished my writing was half as good as this one is. You did a great job. Keep up the great writing. Good to know you have someone there to help you through the hard times.
Tammi aka poet70 |
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Re: For the best person EVER.
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 25th August 2005 @ 07:11:06 PM AEST
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| A very beautiful sweet poem, you're lucky to have somebody like that in your life. SLipSiX. |
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Re: For the best person EVER.
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by Wachumiri on
Tuesday, 30th August 2005 @ 07:50:22 AM AEST
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Hey... you're welcome Brina. Thank you for your kind words. God said to love, and one way to do that is to help those who need it. If anything I do is worthy of praise, it's because He did it first. Praise the Potter for the mass of clay.
Take care.
David |
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Re: For the best person EVER.
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by Wachumiri on
Tuesday, 30th August 2005 @ 07:50:24 AM AEST
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Hey... you're welcome Brina. Thank you for your kind words. God said to love, and one way to do that is to help those who need it. If anything I do is worthy of praise, it's because He did it first. Praise the Potter for the mass of clay.
Take care.
David |
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