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The Deepest Cut
Contributed by
Shnannon
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Thursday, 25th August 2005 @ 05:47:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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You coward.
You couldn't even say it to me.
You don't even know I know.
You think I'm fake?
Well ***** you!
I've never been so real.
Your words cut deeper
Than a knife ever could.
If this works,
And I die tonight,
I hope you always know
That your words pushed me over the edge.
This is the end.
I'll haunt you in your dreams...
Copyright ©
Shnannon
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2005-08-25 17:47:21]
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Re: The Deepest Cut
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by Shattered_soul on
Thursday, 25th August 2005 @ 05:55:51 PM AEST
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That was crazy, but I liked it, I just hope that you dont hurt yourself completly till no longer you'll feel pain.
S.S |
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Re: The Deepest Cut
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by forsaken_soul33 on
Thursday, 25th August 2005 @ 05:57:34 PM AEST
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Your words cut deeper
Than a knife ever could.
Those two lines really spoke to me. Don't let this person be the erason you bring your life to an end. You have to stay strong and keeo your head up. Things will get better, although they only seem to get worse. I hope you feel better.
bye,
☺Mando☺ |
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Re: The Deepest Cut
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by sick_n_twisted on
Thursday, 25th August 2005 @ 09:37:53 PM AEST
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holy..! deadly poem mann! this reminds me of myself what i say to my dad...i guess he never pushed me to the edge if im still here....
i didnt let him bother me as much anymore and i still dont like him but we dont really talk to each other anymore....i hope you dont let get in ur way either...! awesome poem ! loved it ! |
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Re: The Deepest Cut
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by Darkhorse71 on
Friday, 26th August 2005 @ 01:57:35 AM AEST
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A great, emotional write, and a great way to get your feelings out. Keep writing.
Peace, john |
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Re: The Deepest Cut
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by secretwind on
Monday, 29th August 2005 @ 12:55:28 AM AEST
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people suck
he'll get his pain sooner or later
don't die
take time and heal and move on. |
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