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daybreak

Contributed by bustedcadillac on Thursday, 25th August 2005 @ 02:46:26 PM in AEST
Topic: InspirationalPoems



twilight sneaks up the window pane
hoping to engulf me in fleeting warmth.
a chill in the air,
makes my bones feel old.
tonight there are no stars,
merely burning bouys in the sea of black.
trying to keep up with the world,
the moon awakens.
he says "hello world!",
but we all say goodnight.
"how i envy the sun." he says,
with a look of dismay on his face.
weeping slowly through the night,
the moon begins to slip away.
as the dawn approaches,
the anger comes with the burning orange he sees.
"why sun, why do you have it all?"
but the sun does not answer him.
"have you no answer, my burning friend?"
and still the sun says nothing.
as the glow takes over the world,
the moon slips down into his own little world.
"my silly friend." chuckles the sun to himself,
"im merely a star, and compared to you, im nothing!"

daybreak.
by jonathan m. smith




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Re: daybreak (User Rating: 1 )
by blondie_64865 on Thursday, 25th August 2005 @ 02:54:00 PM AEST
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very nice poem and well written i was intrigued by it


Re: daybreak (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 25th August 2005 @ 03:09:00 PM AEST
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A beautiful poem, loved the affect of the sun and the moon. Keep up the good work. SLipSiX.


Re: daybreak (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Thursday, 25th August 2005 @ 03:20:49 PM AEST
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ohhhhhhh I loved this so witty and the way you spoke of the sun moon and stars well made me say ahhhhhhhhh incredible my pure delight to read.Welcome to YPDC!
Michelle


Re: daybreak (User Rating: 1 )
by Countrytennis on Sunday, 28th May 2006 @ 09:26:35 AM AEST
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This was fun to read. Almost like a little short story.





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