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Time To Go
Contributed by
chrissylee
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Thursday, 25th August 2005 @ 10:28:54 AM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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I've packed up the house,
It's almost completely clean,
Just a few more touches,
The walls are all washed,
Just have the windows to wash.
I've added some paint to two rooms while here,
Put in irrigation to water the crop,
I've replaced the blinds,
With much love and care.
It's time to move on,
Find a better life away from here,,
I'll be alright,
With out anything to dispair.
Boys are excited,
They'll start a new school.
Make new friends,
Learn new rules.
With so much more to do,
I better bid you all adieu,
Get back to the mop and bucket,
And see if i can find something new.
Copyright ©
chrissylee
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2005-08-25 10:28:54]
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Re: Time To Go
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 25th August 2005 @ 10:58:05 AM AEST
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Hi Chrissy, lovely to see you posting again... Nice write... Hope all is well in your part of the world...
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Jenni |
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Re: Time To Go
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by Archie on
Thursday, 25th August 2005 @ 02:03:19 PM AEST
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"I packed what I could
and sold what I couldn't
stopped to feel love on the way out of town
I loved like I should
but lived like I couldn"t
I had to lose everything to find out
Maybe forgiveness will find me somewhere down this road
I'm moving on"
Quote from I'm moving on" by Rascal Flatts"
Your poem remind me of the song I quoted above. It is a very good write. |
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Re: Time To Go
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Thursday, 25th August 2005 @ 05:41:37 PM AEST
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I guess poetry is interpreted in different ways by different people.
This one it had an optimistic feel to me............optimistic on new beginnings.To others more of a sadness perhaps.
Good write
Steve
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Re: Time To Go
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by secretwind on
Sunday, 29th October 2006 @ 11:44:55 AM AEST
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I like the feel of this moving on flow
it's good when we can get along
with
new things.
well done. |
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