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Just You
Contributed by
TheOne
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Tuesday, 14th January 2003 @ 11:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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No matter the distance
Between your heart and mine
The heartstrings we've entwined
Still hold true, even now.
Together with you
Turning one heart to 2
Yeah, yeah...
This is the way I've wanted to feel
For the longest time
And I never want another
Just you to call mine
Thinking about you
Every minute of the day
My heart beats with a love-struck delay
Just to beat with yours
Together with you
Turning one heart to 2
Yeah, yeah...
This is the way I've wanted to feel
For the longest time
And I never want another
Just you to call mine
Just you, baby, Just you
No one else but you...
No one else...yeah...
Copyright ©
TheOne
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2003-01-14 23:40:00]
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Re: Just You
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by Jade on
Wednesday, 15th January 2003 @ 12:37:15 AM AEST
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| This is a really good poem. Keep them coming! |
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Re: Just You
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by LOWMAN613 on
Wednesday, 15th January 2003 @ 09:11:57 AM AEST
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| Welcome! This was a good write,seems like it s more like a song! I like this! Christina |
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Re: Just You
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by WordPoet on
Wednesday, 15th January 2003 @ 05:39:51 PM AEST
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Interesting effect this poem had on me... By writing the repeating lyrics it gave the effect of a song while the topic and words being upbeat caused me to be filled with a joy and happiness that most poems fail to inspire. Excellent work.
Doug
"Love is like rain, you never know how hard it's going to hit or how long it will last." |
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