|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
a place with no light
Contributed by
xXxmegsxXx
on
Thursday, 25th August 2005 @ 08:12:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
|
i seem to be stuck
in the dead of night
i'm spending eternity
in a place with no light
i'm trapped in this place
there's no way out
nor anyone to hear
me cry or shout
i'm completly numb
i can't feel a thing
how could i let myself
get this far in?
shadows swallowed me up
and now there's only darkness
there's no hope here
only my intensifying(sp?) sadness
i am stuck in this place
as i lost the fight
now i'm in eternal darkness
a place with no light
Copyright ©
xXxmegsxXx
... [
2005-08-25 08:12:00]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: a place with no light
(User Rating: 1 )
by dagonet on
Thursday, 25th August 2005 @ 02:44:11 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
brilliant poem, flows really well. well conveyed. i have a patheitic idea for the title, tis cheesy but without light there id no shadows, so my idea for title is "the absence of shadow(s)"
if that helps then kool if not hey i tried lol.
great write, keep em coming |
|
|
Re: a place with no light
(User Rating: 1 )
by inoc on
Friday, 26th August 2005 @ 06:27:51 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
maybe shadow could represent fear....so
maybe....Shadow Of Fear....for a title...as I know I would be scared being closed up in the dark....
hope ok?
... A great write though...[I liked the absence of shadow[s] too]
coni |
|
|
Re: a place with no light
(User Rating: 1 )
by Black_Dragon on
Friday, 26th August 2005 @ 10:27:17 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| :o loved it! |
|
|
Re: a place with no light
(User Rating: 1 )
by jemer on
Monday, 29th August 2005 @ 05:46:32 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| well done megs f*cking brilliant!!!!!!!! flows really well and u can really realate to it. well done !!!!1 |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
