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My Cycle
Contributed by
bleeding_corset
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Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 11:16:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
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hopeless
worthless
nobody
nothing
these four words
spin
like a twisted whirlpool
consuming my mind
consuming my thoughts
chewing me up
then spitting me right back out
over and over
it happens again
the cycle of my life
can anybody see?
does anybody know?
my questions always left unanswered
maybe i should just give up
& stop looking for reasons
let it just continue the cycle
consuming me in its spiteful maze
never letting go of its wrath
and forever waiting for that simple answer:
why?
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Re: My Cycle
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by glassicallyunsuperficial on
Thursday, 25th August 2005 @ 03:13:23 AM AEST
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Its a great write!
I too, have been through it and once in a while these thoughts still come back, like you said,"like a twisted whirlpool
consuming my mind
consuming my thoughts
chewing me up
then spitting me right back out
over and over"
cheers,
-glass
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Re: My Cycle
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by holderofthestone on
Thursday, 25th August 2005 @ 03:19:08 AM AEST
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| strong words! and a great write. i know i have been there my self. i like how you expressed yourself here. |
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Re: My Cycle
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by Wachumiri on
Tuesday, 20th December 2005 @ 04:10:43 PM AEST
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Well put. Another good vent.
May you find peace, or at least answers.
Take care.
David |
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