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REFLECTIONS..
Contributed by
lillyjane
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Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 10:39:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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I open my eyes to another day, what is the mirror going to say,
hard to believe a piece of glass, can make my life so over cast,
people say you look ok, just dont look get on with your day,
they probably think, i'm selfish and vain, they cant feel my anguish and pain,
I try so hard not to look in there, but I have to look to comb my hair,
so I say to my self,dont take to long,dont look to see if anything is wrong,
you see just looking seals my fate, for the person in the glass is the person i hate,
So today I look and make her smile, and pray just for a little while,
I can have a normal day, and all my demons stay away...
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lillyjane
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Re: REFLECTIONS..
(User Rating: 1 ) by Archie on
Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 10:49:16 PM AEST (User
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Great soul searching poem. I sometomes hate looking in the mirror. This is a wonderful write. |
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Re: REFLECTIONS..
(User Rating: 1 ) by brew on
Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 10:55:51 PM AEST (User
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WE all make our self.......bitter. We say, we are not barbies.........we say we do not have what others do.But the way i see it...well god made me.,,,,and this is how I am....so like it or lump it. I do critize my self.but...I have to like what others say, as well.! Good post.and yes, we do antalize.but be happy and see.you are pretty.!
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Re: REFLECTIONS..
(User Rating: 1 ) by MorningDove on
Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 10:56:57 PM AEST (User
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I am so happy to know this is not you. So many people do seem to hate their reflection. I don't understand, really. I just look and see me. I can't change it and just accept what I am. We are always our own worst critics. We have to live with who we are. Great post.
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Re: REFLECTIONS..
(User Rating: 1 ) by Darkhorse71 on
Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 11:18:24 PM AEST (User
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I'm glad it's not you too. I can feel that way and I don't even need a mirror! Great write lillyjane, a very emotional poem.
peace, john |
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Re: REFLECTIONS..
(User Rating: 1 ) by Manda2 on
Thursday, 1st September 2005 @ 03:25:51 PM AEST (User
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A brilliant write Lillyjane, nobody should hate themselves like that, I know the person looking back must be so unhappy to be so unloved by the person looking in, please love her. |
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