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The world is Small..................................
Contributed by
brew
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Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 10:15:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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The sky, is black, tonite
Yet all is a shimmer in the heart
To open a place, that has been closed
Is the new beginning, and hope to no end
So close, we have become you see
Do not let it seep, from thee
Keep it flowing , which is meant to be
And do not fret, be the one who takes thee
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Re: The world is Small..................................
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by holderofthestone on
Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 10:28:57 PM AEST
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beautiful.... lovely word choice here.
"So close, we have become you see
Do not let it seep, from thee"-- nice! A+++ |
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Re: The world is Small..................................
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by MorningDove on
Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 10:59:07 PM AEST
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Now I like this a lot. Short, to the point, and has so much tenderness in it. This is an excellent write. Lucky dog, you!!!!!!!!!! lol
Smiles,
Rita |
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Re: The world is Small..................................
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by Bruce on
Thursday, 25th August 2005 @ 12:23:57 AM AEST
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| very sweet |
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Re: The world is Small..................................
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 25th August 2005 @ 01:01:20 AM AEST
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Awww..lovely write, Brew....
I'm wondering.....is this about our mutual friend?? You don't have to reply to that..:>) I am just so happy for you..
Jenni |
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Re: The world is Small..................................
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by glassicallyunsuperficial on
Thursday, 25th August 2005 @ 03:21:48 AM AEST
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I was attracted by the title and yeah,
I love your poem...definitely short and sweet
cheers,
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Re: The world is Small..................................
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 25th August 2005 @ 10:04:21 PM AEST
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I got many a strange feelings reading this poem and very vivid images, interesting almost like looking 2 the future very nice write.
Ben |
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Re: The world is Small..................................
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by Man_On_High on
Friday, 26th August 2005 @ 09:39:24 PM AEST
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This is so very romantic..and true!
there is so much said in these few lines..
I could fill volumes with my comment alone..
lol...but I digress..
It's lovely Dayna-
Yours-
Billy
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