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love hurts
Contributed by
maddie
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Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 09:49:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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is it better to live or to love
or fly like a dove
would you rather gaze into the stars at night
or actually be the beautiful sight
does it hurt more if someone breaks your heart
or if it's been jabbed with a dart
does it help the pain if you pretend it never happened
or should you wait to let the pain mend
with all this being said
it feels like it's better to be dead
at least you wouldn't have to love
and you COULD actually fly like a dove!
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maddie
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2005-08-24 21:49:22]
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Re: love hurts
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by Archie on
Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 09:53:57 PM AEST
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| Great poem. I ponder such thoughts sometimes and I wonder and think about my purpose on the earth. |
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Re: love hurts
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 25th August 2005 @ 03:42:36 AM AEST
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| A beautiful poem I loved it, actually it does not matter, if you're severly hurt by love, it feels like you get stabbed by by knives in your heart everyday, trust me, I know, a very good poem. SLipSiX. |
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Re: love hurts
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by eyes-of-love on
Friday, 28th July 2006 @ 07:45:36 AM AEST
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| My friend thought that death was easier than dealing with the hurt love deals with.. but great work |
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