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Dream within a dream
Contributed by
FleurdeSang
on
Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 08:52:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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The withering flame of a spent candle whimpers its last goodbye,
And dies with a sigh of smoky illusions...
A meek cry from a distant nothing seeking attention,
The heart wishes to feel passion, but where is the apparition to reciprocate it?
Desire searches for a body to consume,
With its heavenly stench of peach and sexual gratification,
I feel your hands, so tender, like warm chocolaty kisses on a winter evening,
My eyelids fluttering an incoherent melody of longing,
Lightonlightofflightonlightofflightonlightofflightonlightofflightonlightoff...
These fingers have a mind of their own,
And they tell a story that I wish not to share,
Yet... I can’t... stop,
I can’t stop from ripping every ligament and muscle,
Every celestial vein and fragment that dwells inside of me,
Until I am revealed...
From
The
Inside
Out...
The texture of night caresses me like your satin fingers,
The moon exposing her soul and flooding my room with her cerulean anguish,
The silent rapture of your depthless gaze, sweet redemption...
I remember what you whispered into the curve of my breast,
I remember your eyes ravaging my steel walls and leaving me with nothing,
But my love for you,
)))))Undressed and Uninhibited(((((
And I can’t help but wonder just what exactly ARE you?
Because, surely, you cannot be real...
My luscious fantasy, my radiant Saint of lovers’ dreams,
You must be a figment…a bittersweet delusion, my own creation,
Because I cannot believe that these strong arms protecting me are yours,
I cannot fathom that these irresistible lips painting masterpieces upon mine are from thy own precious mouth...
Yet... I can’t... NOT ... love you,
Adore you, praise you, sacrifice all that I am to you...
Divine illusion, engulf me in your warmth, let me bask in your beauty,
Bathe me in your butterfly kisses and exquisite caresses...
Immerse me in a sea of moonlight and your essence,
Satiate every desolate crevice inside of me,
Complete me in ways only you can...
Darling... whisper my name upon the winds... as if a half-remembered melody...
Querido... love me... as if I were your last...
Copyright ©
FleurdeSang
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2005-08-24 20:52:19]
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Re: Dream within a dream
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 09:02:39 PM AEST
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| A beautiful sweet romantic poem, I loved it, the romantic images you used through out the poem, really made me feel love within. SLipSiX. Keep writing. |
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Re: Dream within a dream
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by vibes2go on
Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 09:04:48 PM AEST
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every time I say your best .. then your best really happens. I'm waiting to be deleted but that hasn't happenend either .. so I stop by to read once in awhile..
... my lovely soul sistah .. 6****** |
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Re: Dream within a dream
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 09:43:37 PM AEST
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Very creative writing.
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emy |
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Re: Dream within a dream
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by Archie on
Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 09:59:18 PM AEST
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| This is good. I think this is a poem to share with a lover. |
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Re: Dream within a dream
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by xxbreathlessx on
Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 10:59:02 PM AEST
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| breath-takingly beautiful. your choice of words and imagery really get the reader involved. i loved it. amazing. |
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Re: Dream within a dream
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 25th August 2005 @ 02:07:18 PM AEST
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What words r there 2 describe u and poetry
u make me fall in love when i read your
writting as though u were a reminace of a
dream left over from the renisance, this is a
work of art and u r an artist's artist, what a
beauty, no less than perfection . . .
((((((MollyBear))))))
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