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Slipping ( a dove calls )
Contributed by
parkman
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Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 08:47:39 PM in AEST
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Slipping in, slipping out
Eyes flicker, shadow of doubt
Hangs in the air, haunting
A black dove, calling
James I hear it shout
Slipping in, slipping out
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Re: Slipping ( a dove calls )
(User Rating: 1 ) by lostinmyself on
Thursday, 17th November 2005 @ 08:16:44 PM AEST (User
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Hmmm, while I have no idea what this is a about, I do like it.
It's short and while there isn't much to say about it, I do like the little rhyme there was, and that you used the sam,e first and last lines.
Nice little write,
*hugs*
Phil xxx |
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