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Marked with high spirits
Contributed by
Kingsman
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Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 07:39:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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a valiant heart marked with high spirits
never had the chance to shine behind the curtains
afraid of the audiance, but chin-up and reckless
never needed 6 minutes of fame, but 6 seconds
his chest was stout, his mind was militant
he was hardly cocky with a gritty smile of a hot shot
this man was rock hard, forward and fearless
he knew his life sentence, he was holding the lyrics
a relentless being never showing the white flag
hes just lost in the depths looking for the right path
the curtains have him hidden, feeling no love
his only hear is he finds his destiny and folds up
Copyright ©
Kingsman
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2005-08-24 19:39:17]
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Re: Marked with high spirits
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by waos on
Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 09:02:13 PM AEST
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I thought this was good because it isn't just a poem spouting off the feeling of
the day or simply stating circumstances. This was descriptive and let the reader
look into it and consider it. Nice work.
~Kara~~Waos~ |
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Re: Marked with high spirits
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by Kingsman on
Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 09:11:48 PM AEST
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| Thanks, appreciated ;) |
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Re: Marked with high spirits
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by cutestmofo on
Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 09:22:50 PM AEST
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| i have no idea what the first person said but i loved it it was awesome plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzwrite more |
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Re: Marked with high spirits
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by Kingsman on
Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 09:36:21 PM AEST
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| lol thanks for the origonal comment |
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Re: Marked with high spirits
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by Ruby2sdy on
Wednesday, 24th May 2006 @ 03:46:37 PM AEST
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| nice. weird but good. |
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