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Unhappy
Contributed by
O7NeVeS
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Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 06:01:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Unhappy
Why do thoughts of you still linger
It stings my heart like a bee’s stinger
Why does it kill me when you’re not around?
I smile no more all I do is frown
Why is it that I always want to cry?
All I think about is “when will I die?”
Why is there no happiness in my life?
The only there is, is so much strife
I no longer have an appetite
As well as no energy left to fight
All day long all I do is sleep
Even in my dreams thoughts of you creep
I’m tired of writing these poems that are sad
Now that I think about it, it gets me so mad
Why do I depend on another to make me happy?
Happiness should be rooted in the person I call me
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O7NeVeS
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2005-08-24 18:01:07]
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Re: Unhappy
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by Urizen on
Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 06:28:24 PM AEST
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| Good poem, and a good thought at the end. far easier said than done though. |
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Re: Unhappy
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by chanceof_promise on
Sunday, 20th November 2005 @ 08:28:23 PM AEST
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"I’m tired of writing these poems that are sad
Now that I think about it, it gets me so mad
Why do I depend on another to make me happy?
Happiness should be rooted in the person I call me"
i love that..and it is really true..
good write.. |
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Re: Unhappy
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by CurtisC on
Monday, 28th November 2005 @ 10:11:52 PM AEST
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well i remember like it was yesterday what you were going through back then and this fits it to a T, you got through it though didn't you :) anyway, this poem was great, really sad, but still great....
curtis |
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