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Last Kiss
Contributed by
juliette
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Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 06:00:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I kiss the fresh drops of blood from your familiar lips,
tasting only bitterness on your tongue -
Gone is the sugary venom of true loves bite.
Yet to retract my initiation is to bridge that
intimate gap between our past and future,
to deprive myself that pleasure; this pain.
Spare me the crusty edges of solemn sympathy-
I decide the outcome of this treachery,
our downfall my last rite to you.
I say when you might pull away,
when it is safe to breathe again,
when the bright blood of the last kiss has dried,
Only then will I set you free.
Copyright ©
juliette
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2005-08-24 18:00:58]
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Re: Last Kiss
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by Unbreakable on
Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 08:11:51 PM AEST
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This is a very powerful write, I like it a lot. The wording and phrases you use are perfect to get the image of complete and final power across. Very good work, keep it up!
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Re: Last Kiss
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 25th August 2005 @ 02:13:07 PM AEST
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This is passion at it's best irevokable love
true commitment such possesive prowess
that can only be adhered 2 by a women, a
most enchanting peice of writting . . .
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Re: Last Kiss
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by aprilrose on
Friday, 28th October 2005 @ 03:32:18 AM AEST
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very very wonderfull poem i enjoyed reading it alot cant wait to read more of your poems
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