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system crash
Contributed by
lostrelic
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Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 03:42:07 PM in AEST
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system crash of my world
new thoughts downloaded threw my mind
a new reality to interface
a virus took my memory
blank screen as my thoughts reload
a flood of data destroying my hard drive
this keystoke wrong in everyway
love is the virus you entered in my system
love taking control
Copyright ©
lostrelic
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2005-08-24 15:42:07]
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Re: system crash
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by Jeff_Scott_Morehead on
Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 03:52:30 PM AEST
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Very unique write.
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Re: system crash
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by Sinned on
Tuesday, 30th August 2005 @ 08:30:45 PM AEST
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Lostrelic
Of all the viruses you are overcomed by the strongest.
May the best come your way.
Nice different poem.
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Re: system crash
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by remote on
Friday, 16th September 2005 @ 02:38:13 PM AEST
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| Go linux, at least you'd be always in control (of your PC anyway). |
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Re: system crash
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by WAE on
Friday, 16th September 2005 @ 03:50:51 PM AEST
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A nice way of putting it. I like how you come to love at end...
Nice work!
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