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Break my Heart
Contributed by
BraveSaint
on
Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 02:56:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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these pieces lay here shattered
a bomb was ticking in my heart
i was acting like nothing mattered
this never worked from the start
tears lay on the ground with me
the rain starts to pour loudly
a vision of your face is all i can see
i can say this proudly
you break my heart
you bruise my soul
you left me there
out in the cold
you break my heart
it was over from that point
show me where i went wrong
take me to my home
and explain to me on more time
giving up is easy for me
i destroy what i know
and you cant see
i am alive
i feel alive
i cross a bridge
and i am alive
i feel alive
you break my heart
you bruise my soul
you left me there
out in the cold
you break my heart
you you break my heart
no-longer forever
i am alive,i feel alive
....you break my heart
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BraveSaint
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2005-08-24 14:56:19]
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Re: Break my Heart
(User Rating: 1 )
by Ruby2sdy on
Wednesday, 24th May 2006 @ 03:20:14 PM AEST
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| lovely poem, i really felt your pain. |
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Re: Break my Heart
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by europeanprincess on
Sunday, 28th May 2006 @ 09:07:30 PM AEST
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| Hey BraveSaint. I am sorry but hope everything is better. I have been there to and believe me that feeling does not go away. Even when we finally meet someone that may clear it up, that feeling is still there. Im with you and I will pray that both of us will find that right someone again. |
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