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The Girl I met on The bus
Contributed by
Gadower
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Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 01:18:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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She gives me hope
I believe in something again
So youthful
So pure
So gullible
So beautiful
She’s one of the few left
There’s still some innocence left in the world
She’s going to change so many lives
I know she’s changed mine
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Gadower
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2005-08-24 13:18:40]
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Re: The Girl I met on The bus
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by JenJen on
Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 01:46:03 PM AEST
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| such a sweet short poem! |
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Re: The Girl I met on The bus
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 04:38:35 PM AEST
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The poem makes me think of you talking about a daughter, but the title makes me want to know more. I can accept the fact that a daughter would change your life ... but I wanna know more about what she did or said that left you feeling this way ... by that interest you created ... I would say, you dun good.
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Re: The Girl I met on The bus
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by Ruby2sdy on
Wednesday, 24th May 2006 @ 03:32:08 PM AEST
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| reminds me of a jeff buckley song... yard of blonde girls... amazing song. |
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