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The Window
Contributed by
Tanna
on
Tuesday, 14th January 2003 @ 09:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Standing outside the window
Looking in on life
Innuendo and self realization
Deeply cuts this knife
Numerous rivers to cross
Countless bridges to burn
To many days lost in thought
Wondering when will it be my turn
Another burden to ponder
While I yearn for my souls release
I wander aimlessly through the elements
Will this madness ever cease
So I stand before this window
A haunted empty shell
Looking in at life
While I linger in this wretched Hell
Copyright ©
Tanna
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2003-01-14 21:40:00]
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Re: The Window
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 15th January 2003 @ 05:44:59 AM AEST
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| I am sure one day you will reach your cave of heart where you can see the ocean of light and the beautiful sky adorned with the lord of splendour..thats you yourself...and the universal self...o k..dear Tanna...Venkat |
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Re: The Window
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 24th January 2003 @ 06:41:37 PM AEST
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| ..did the reflection from yon window shine enough to tell you what a creatively talented poetess' you are? |
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Re: The Window
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by riverofwords on
Monday, 17th February 2003 @ 09:18:29 AM AEST
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waht a great write very strong ..very deep
so many questions ..no answers just brings more questions
awesome words
loved this effect you have brought out in this poem
peace be your journey
terry
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Re: The Window
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by Archie on
Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 05:49:01 PM AEST
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You are not alone:
Times of loneliness come and trap us
in sorrows and pain that silences laughter
that is when I need to get away
Find a quiet place to write
read a book or sometimes pray,
and if I don't pray I talk to myself
so that I can learn to help some one else. |
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