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You and I
Contributed by
Thewix
on
Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 11:05:42 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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Love, he cried
for the last time his live
he closes his eyes
and kisses his wife
for the last time he breathes
his temper is changing
for the first time he realised
his life was a strangeling
seconds remaining
he opens his eye
he said we were great together
you and I
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2005-08-24 11:05:42]
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Re: You and I
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by cutestmofo on
Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 11:10:33 AM AEST
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| coooooooooooool i'm always a fan of great endings in a poem i liked it i liked it alot short but sweet |
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Re: You and I
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by Archie on
Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 11:46:37 AM AEST
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This is a great poem. Your title is the same as a song by Stevie Wonder
"For in my mind, we can conquer the world
in love you and I, you and I, you and I"
I see a similar meaning in your poem.
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