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Red Clouds (hear my plead)
Contributed by
blue_angel
on
Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 10:50:37 AM in AEST
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Dark reddening clouds they hang over me
Draping their darkness so I cannot see
A storm of such splendor brews up in the skies
As a drop of blood falls to my eyes
Raindrops they fall, congealing blood
Drowning me in a deepening flood
Thickening heavens, I cannot breathe
The clouds are ablaze in all of their seethe
Existing a world now blemished to red
Still lingering clouds above my head
Discolored skies, please hear my plead
Pour your red raindrops down into me
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Re: Red Clouds (hear my plead)
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by Archie on
Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 11:57:33 AM AEST
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| I think you meant "plea in your title and verses. The meaning I get from this poem is a life lost of it's meaning searching to get it back. That is a great concept. |
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Re: Red Clouds (hear my plead)
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by sprinter27 on
Saturday, 3rd September 2005 @ 10:55:16 PM AEST
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wow... jennie! i love this. as i love all yours. sounds a lot like some of my poems except dif. lol. i guess that's y we are best friends. i'll come with an umbrella and protect you! great write, keep it up!
~sprints |
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