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Drowning
Contributed by
glassicallyunsuperficial
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Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 09:49:19 AM in AEST
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Sea mouths engulfed me
I waved but no one sees
Constant sinner with dirtied hands
I guess they kill people with no friends
Random hands they grabbed my legs
I kicked and struggled till I ached
Damned liars are just meant to be
Can never, or ever be begged to be free
Clouded water they form in my eyes
Louder and louder we hear the desperate cries
I turned and found I was the only one
T'is fate I am its only son's
daughter of the damned
No matter how far I'd ran
in full despair
I couldn't be spared
sinking ,
thinking.
sinking,
still sinking
A mouthful of stale oxygen
then another forced mouthful of salty seawater
blinking,
blinking,
still thinking
absorbed the murky dark water into my eyes
willing them to fill up and bloat till I die...
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Re: Drowning
(User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 02:47:35 PM AEST
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Love the imagery in this..
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Re: Drowning
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by xxbreathlessx on
Tuesday, 30th August 2005 @ 04:14:42 PM AEST
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| very dark and morbid, and great imagery. well written! |
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